I think this was a great chance to take, I really loved where it went - but I'm probably biased, since I have a girlfriend that is... similar to Annabelle. Heh. The pacing is nice and the emotions are so real. I love that you can really tell the difference between the three sharing the body as well, you've done a great job with the characterization.
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Date: 4/16/14 01:31 am (UTC)